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It was a snowy winter evening and everyone was returning to their respective common rooms after dinner. It was a tiring day for the Patil twins. They had spent their entire Saturday in the little town of Hogsmead which lies within walking distance from the castle. They made their way up to the Gryffindor common room and after changing their clothes for more comfortable pajamas they went to sit in the big red armchairs nearest the warm flame.
In the chairs across from them sat Harry and Ron. It seemed as though they were discussing children's tales from both the magical and non-magical world. This piqued their interest and both Padma and Parvati looked at each other with a small smile. They've had their fair share of epic stories told to them since they were small children.
"...But you must have heard about Babbitty Rabbity and her Cackling Stump! That one was one of my favorites from the Beedle and the Bard. Mum used to read that book every night. I mean when I was a little kid of course!" Ron blushed slightly at the last remark.
"I haven't heard of that story. Hardly any to be honest. Just whatever I heard in grade school. Muggles have this book of tales by the Grimm brothers. And of course my aunt and uncle weren't going to read me stories. They liked to pretend I didn't exist at all," Harry said with a smirk.
"I bet you boys have never heard about the sons of Rama, Luv and Kush," the twins interjected in unison.
"Who asked you, Patil! We were having a private conversation!" Ron huffed and looked away.
"Don't get your wand in a knot, Weasley. You were speaking loud enough that I'm sure that we could be heard up in the dormitories!" Padma rolled her eyes.
"Are these magical tales?" Harry asked with curiosity.
"No, these are just traditional Indian epics that play a huge part in our culture. Padma and I would listen to them since we were small. As a matter of fact, our Mum sent us a few books that contain a collection of the stories. Of course our favorite involves a pair of twin brothers for obvious reasons." Parvati smiled at Harry after shooting Ron an annoyed glance.
"Go on! Let's hear it then!" Ron muttered under his breath.
"Okay, well, there was a king named Rama, who ruled over the kingdom of Ayodhya. All his subjects were very happy and prosperous under his rule. He was a gracious king who always sought to fix problems that any one of his subjects may have. He had a lovely wife named Sita, who ruled at his side."
As Padma began the story more and more of the occupants in the room began to listen attentively, some even coming closer to the twins and sitting on the huge rug by the fireplace.
"One day one of Rama's men came to report something that he had heard while on patrol. He heard a man berate his wife and state that he could never be a fool like Rama and allow his wife to stay after she had lived with another man. This news troubled Rama. Did his subjects see him as a fool? Should he send his wife away into exile even though she was to give birth soon? He decided that it would be for the best interest of his subjects and sent his brother Laxmana to take Sita far away. Laxmana did as he was told with a heavy heart. Sita eventually found her way through the jungle to a hermitage occupied by a man named Maharshi Valmiki. He took her in and she lived peacefully. Here she gave birth to Rama's twin sons, Luv and Kush. Maharshi Valmiki educated them to the best of his ability. They grew up incredibly strong and healthy. Maharshi Valmiki told the twins of all the adventures of Rama since they could speak, of course without revealing that their mother Sita played a large role in many of these tales. Instead they replaced her name with 'Vaidehi' since Sita is from a place called Videha. After hearing that Rama sent his wife into exile only because of some town gossip, the twins grew sad and always wondered what happened to this poor woman.
One particular day, the twins captured a pristine white horse that belonged to Rama. This horse was to be used for the very important horse sacrifice that took place every year. Laxmana saw the horse and demanded the twins return it at once. After they argued back and forth, a group of Rama's men confronted the twins in battle and clearly Kush and Luv were the victors. Rama then sent Laxmana to personally battle them. Laxmana fell to Luv and Kush's bow and arrows. Eventually, filled with curiosity, Rama went to see for himself these children who could defeat so many men. Once the twins were in front of Rama he demanded to know who their parents were. Kush and Luv only spoke of their mother, Sita. Rama blanched at the name and asked the twins to lead them back to their mother. He could not believe it! Right in front of him was his wife. The wife he sent away because of mere gossip. Humbled, he realized that these incredible twin boys were his own sons. He begged Sita to forgive him, but she was overcome with humiliation and grief and pleaded with Mother Earth to take her back into the Earth from which she was born. Saddened yet pleased to have met his sons, Rama took them back with him to Ayodhya to take their place as princes of the land."
Everyone in the room looked as though they were hanging onto every word that came out of Padma's lips.
"Bloody hell, that was alright!" Ron said sheepishly.
Padma and Parvati were flocked with questions from the other students about all the tales they knew. It was a very good way to end their night to say the least.
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Author's Note:
Phew! I had been playing around with the idea of the Patil twins kind of being storytellers and decided to use a comic book to bring it together. Of course the tale of Rama's twin sons has a little more detail in it but in order to meet the word limit (I finished at 999 words!) I had to kind of make to where I didn't delve into a lot of detail. Some things in the original tale also had a lot of background information as we all know. It was very difficult for me to try to do the story they were telling any sort of justice all while keeping the integrity of the plot. There is a lot more dialogue between the characters which makes gives the story more depth. The comic is most definitely worth the read and will give you another look at what became of Rama's twin sons other than what told in the Ramayana. I personally read the condensed modern version by Narayan and it didn't go into very much detail pertaining to the twins after Sita's exile. Or, I should say, as much as I would have liked.
I based this story of a comic book that can be found in the Bizzell!
The Sons of Rama: Luv and Kush -- The Invincible Twins (Volume 503) by Amar Chitra
Hey Pita!
ReplyDeleteSo as a Harry Potter fan I love that you used the setting of the Beedle the Bard common room chat as a place to share some traditional stories as well. I think Gryffindor should earn some points for being culturally diverse. Also this part of the story is not something I have read this version of so it's nice to see this more expanded version. Using the Patil twins was genius! Great story Pita!
Um, WoW. You did an excellent job incorporating a Harry Potter theme into your story. I like this idea because they are student who potentially maybe would have taken a class like Indian Epics to learn about other muggle cultures. This is a lot of fun! I think having this storytelling within a storytelling frame works really well. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent follow-up to your Padma and the Black Lake story. You did a really good job of bringing the wizarding world and the common room to life. I like how you referenced Tales of Beedle the Bard and you used Ron’s language. The picture you used didn’t do much for me. Since this is a story set in Harry Potter’s world, this is a good chance to have a picture of the common room or something that looks very similar. I also thought that Padma’s story was a little rushed. But as you said in your author’s note, you used 999 words. The scope of this story might have been a little long for the room you had to tell it. It might be useful to try to remove extraneous details where possible. For instance, the sentence saying “they replaced her name with ‘Vaidehi’”, is not necessary. This was a very good story, especially your description of the wizarding world. Great job!
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ReplyDeleteI am actually in the Myth-Folklore class, but I wanted to pop over for my extra credit this week. I am taking the Indian Epics course next semester, so I wanted kind of an idea of what the content of the class was like. Yours was the first portfolio I looked at for the class, and I am really glad I chose yours.
I took a look at your story A Telling of Tales in Gryffindor Tower. I am a huge Harry Potter fan (I preordered the final book and didn’t emerge from my room until I had finished it after it arrived), so I was really excited to see how you spun the story. I like that you chose to tell your story from the perspective of the Patil twins—what an apt choice for this course. I love that you mention Babbitty Ribbitty and the Cackling Stump; I can absolutely remember that part in the seventh book. I think framing the story of Luv and Kush within a Harry Potter take was such a creative idea, and you pulled it off so well! Very nicely done!!
Hey, Pita! First of all, I am a huge fan of Harry Potter myself! In fact, I just watched The Order of the Phoenix earlier this afternoon. That being said, this was my first time to read your portfolio stories and when I saw “A Telling of Tales in Gryffindor Tower”, that really caught my eye and I just had to read it. I thought you did an excellent job with the character dialogue in this story. Every time Ron spoke, it reminded me of something he would say in one of the movies. You were able to use the dialogue in a way that shows off Ron’s and Harry’s individual characters, which were spot on! What makes this story even better for me is that in Harry Potter, there is a set of Indian twins at Hogwarts, so I pictured the story as them telling it to Ron and Harry by the fire in the commons area.
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